I haven’t had time to participate in the Friday Fictioneers or The Photo Fiction Challenges. Reading Mix Bags this morning he introduced me to a new challenge. So check it out. I think it would be fun. The Chain Writing Challenge being hosted by Kerrie Ann Salsac
I tried this and i think it will be fun. Check it out.
Here are the links before and after my first installment mine Link 1, Link 2, Link 3, Link 4, Link 5, Link 6, Link 7, Link 8, Link 9, Link 10, Link 11
Here is my next part of the story.
“Yes I have her.” George said into his cell. “She won’t get away. I know she’s important.”
He pressed the end button, grind his teeth and squeezed the phone in his hand. His father is a prick. He wanted to marry Melinda but his father insisted he marry Cindy. Just business just like when he was a kid his father made him befriend that nerdy kid Brain. He wanted George snoop around Brian’s house for some old bearer bonds. By the time he found the papers he was an outcast in school. This time he lost his true love, Melinda.
If any of the links above don’t work you can click on here to read the chain of stories.
silentlyheardonce 
Oh no, now you’ve got me feeling a bit sorry for George and his lost love! Sounds like his father is the real power.
Yea I thought a twist could help add some mystery.
Not only is he not the king pin but you have developed a motive, and a background of pain for him. No more black and white, hello shades of grey 🙂
Great spin!
Thanks the entries after mine really twisted it up. I will add one more and see if I can twist another curve in it.
Excellent. So the plot thickens further. He is not the kingpin 🙂
You know the keyboard has a mind of it’s own. LOL I just notice the keyboard really has a mind of its own when it typed the title up there. 🙂
haha it does that all by itself 🙂
🙂 finally home so I may be sleeping soon. Good night.
It’s gone 2am here so I should be sleeping anyway. Good night Kim, and thanks for the comments, links and tweets