A cool breeze reaches up and kisses the perspiration from their brow and as they take a rest from their hike. A secluded area with all the privacy they want. “Come honey let’s look over the cliff.” Maryanne says. Sean drops his backpack and joins her at the edge. “Oh you can’t see from there come closer.”
“What’s down there?” Sean asks
“I see a mama bear and her cubs.”
Sean puts one foot on the edge and carefully pushes his body out to see down the cliff. “Where?” He asks.
Maryanne pushes. “There!” She smiles a smile of satisfaction.
©Kimberly Wilhelmina Floria 01/22/14
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It’s time for Friday Fictioneer’s and it’s another week that I am sharing my interpretation for the above photo prompt. For those who haven’t heard Friday fictioneeer is an addictive writing challenge. Thanks to our host Rochelle Wisoff-Fields of Addicted to Purple who provides us with a new photo to work with every Wednesday until Friday to come up with an original 100 word story. It is an excellent way to fine tune your editing craft. But it’s okay if you go over or below the word count a little. I guess it’s okay as long as you’re not submitting War and Peace. I find it challenging to work my story, this week poem down or up until I have exactly 100 words.
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